Feedback on grade #1

Well done guys - the blog reflects excellent group collaboration, particularly on creative ideas for the track. The audience research is well planned, you have met all deadlines (apart from Tom- still incomplete TA1). As a group, you are working at a level 4, however Mark and Tom your textual analysis is at a level 3+ and 3 respectively which will impact the overall planning grade. you don't seem to have made changes to the first analysis that I recommended. Remember, the group as a whole may be a level 4, but your individual contributions in terms of deconstructions will determine your individual grade for planning.

Also - can you spellcheck, punctuate and on the textual analysis include a link to the actual video you are analysing.

Nevertheless, moodboard response was excellent and this is set to be a very promising project. The research is clearly informing the concept.